The Rerun of Mayors Money

[Red]

Originally Posted by jbrasco951

u r right.

Sarettah is always right. Just ask him, he'll tell you.

[CDSmith]

Just for the thrill of it all, I would like to take a shot at rewriting the original post, just to see if what I would have posted would have come off any better.

Indulge me....


"Hi all, Johnny Brasco here, looking forward to getting to know everyone here on Oprano.

I am the producer for Ynot radio and not directly in the biz, so please forgive me if this post oversteps any boundaries. I have what I feel is an important one-time announcement for you...

I just wanted to let everyone know that Mayorsmoney.com will be showcased in a YNOT Radio special Tuesday December 6 at 2pm Eastern/11am Pacific. The Mayor himself will answer questions in the chat room, should be well worth joining in.

I hope to see you there, so by all means consider this an invitation."



Any good?

[Nickatilynx]

Originally Posted by CDSmith

Just for the thrill of it all, I would like to take a shot at rewriting the original post, just to see if what I would have posted would have come off any better.

Indulge me....


"Hi all, Johnny Brasco here, looking forward to getting to know everyone here on Oprano.

I am the producer for Ynot radio and not directly in the biz, so please forgive me if this post oversteps any boundaries. I have what I feel is an important one-time announcement for you...

I just wanted to let everyone know that Mayorsmoney.com will be showcased in a YNOT Radio special Tuesday December 6 at 2pm Eastern/11am Pacific. The Mayor himself will answer questions in the chat room, should be well worth joining in.

I hope to see you there, so by all means consider this an invitation."



Any good?

You'd have persuaded me ya smooth talking bastard!

;-))

[CDSmith]

Originally Posted by Nickatilynx

You'd have persuaded me ya smooth talking bastard!

;-))

I've been giving this silver tongue a workout lately, yup.

Now if I could only persuade you to promote PussyCash

[Red]

Originally Posted by CDSmith

I've been giving this silver tongue a workout lately, yup.

Who's the lucky woman?





You know you bring out the naughtiness in me.

[CDSmith]

Originally Posted by Red

Who's the lucky woman?

You know you bring out the naughtiness in me.

The gentleman in me want's to say "I never lick and tell"

[MorganGrayson]

Originally Posted by CDSmith

The gentleman in me want's to say "I never lick and tell"

If I give you any more points I think we'll be legally having an affair.

*seriously*

Johnny...CD gave you a *great* rewrite on that post. Then, by demonstration, he showed you the next important step, which is coming back to the thread to respond to posts.

(Of course, he's also screwed up, because we're going to tie him to a chair and force him to tutor! )