(Hey I bet there's some Vodka in there!)
1. RE:TOUR PAGE -
http://www.teen-swing.com/previews.php?s=0&t=1&w=0
Let's see your face more at the top of that, there is a blue hole in the design looks like it needs to be filled. Also that picture on the left up there isn't bad, but I'm sure you have better - at least use Photoshop clone or blur tool on the vein.
2. 1st clip - The action is good, very close up but if you are going hi-def, (is it real or frame format) up the quality, a lot of pixelation and colors are flat. I like you talking at the end with cum all over your face though - nice and sexy. Also, name all your clips differently, because if the user saves them to hard drive they will overwrite each other.
3. 2nd clip - Hey the group scene idea like that is great, and it seems real informal like a party at home- that I like. But if this is the quality inside, with all the pixelation and in the transitions - those garish colors (as a result of the compression) - well it took away my initial enthusiam. It gets worse half-way through and it seems like its almost too casual, real violent swift camera swings, too much giggling, etc., if I was consumer I'm not sure I'd want to join for $24.95 - maybe a $3 pay-per-view or something. But I do like your attitude and anything goes idea - definately.
4. 3rd clip - Again your sexuality is no issue here- you are really into it that's more than half. But the pixelations and flat colors need work. I'm sure the guy enjoyed it though!
If this is your first effort, congrats you are really doing it! Just fix those quality issues and the design and you'll be off. I make my own content on my site, but we have an affiliates section, if you change those things we'll get you on. If you to trade passes write me at the site. If you want to shoot with us, the same.
G.d