Just for the thrill of it all, I would like to take a shot at rewriting the original post, just to see if what I would have posted would have come off any better.
Indulge me....
"Hi all, Johnny Brasco here, looking forward to getting to know everyone here on Oprano.
I am the producer for Ynot radio and not directly in the biz, so please forgive me if this post oversteps any boundaries. I have what I feel is an important one-time announcement for you...
I just wanted to let everyone know that Mayorsmoney.com will be showcased in a YNOT Radio special Tuesday December 6 at 2pm Eastern/11am Pacific. The Mayor himself will answer questions in the chat room, should be well worth joining in.
I hope to see you there, so by all means consider this an invitation."
Any good?
