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Originally posted by originalheather@Feb 25 2003, 12:39 PM
The tour looks nice 
I found the following errors, though:
Check your spelling on tour1.html. "jacuzzi’s" doesn't have an apostrophe and it's misspelled. I think it's spelled Jacquzzi. You might want to check that, I didn't look it up, but I'm certain it has a q in it.
The Web's Largest Collection...the capitalization of so many words is grammatically incorrect. If you want emphasis in the sentence, which is too long (I'm the queen of run-on sentences, so I know), make the word in ALL CAPS instead or use italics.
The videos paragraph is also almost all one long sentence. When people read sentences that long, they run out of breath waiting for the pause or skip over it altogether. Punctuation breaks up long strings of words to make them more readable.
That's all I noticed 
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Jacuzzi is the correct spelling.
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=jacuzzi
But you are correct, the plural of jacuzzi wouldn't have an apostrophe....in fact, because Jacuzzi is a trademark company name I'm not sure there even IS a plural? Maybe change it to 'hottubs' or something.
