More constructive feedback requested

[gonzo]

The Fat Fucking Designer has been after it once again and I think hes truned out yet another beauty. This tour was easy enough for me to send design specs to the FFD as I dropped off a dozen cheese Krystals and 3 chili cheese pups.

Im interested in seeing what yall think as well.

http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...trash/tour1.htm (http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/dixietrailertrash/tour1.htm)
http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...trash/tour2.htm (http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/dixietrailertrash/tour2.htm)
http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/...rtrash/join.htm (http://www.gonzofilms.com/depraveddollars/dixietrailertrash/join.htm)

The new tour for WhorebaitHals.com is in place and converting traffic very nicely according to my tests.So if you were considering sending depraveddollars traffic now is the time as the new tour addresses leak issues that were expressed prior.
http://www.whorebaithals.com/tour1/tour1.htm


Ill be taking the FFD some fried cheeseburgers for dinner so any feedback yall give would be most appreciated so I can get them in before he passes out [and his neighbors from the gas] for the evening.

If your not sending us your traffic....you should. This shit is as real as it gets and it retains. We have sites for all straight niches AND softcore banners going in place starting today.

[Newton]

Tour 1 and 2, don't like the header, the images dont work that well with the models. Tour 3 header is better and all the footers are cool.

There is no 'E' in any of the Horny's peppered around the tours.

"The souths nastiest sluts and horney house wives! over 15000 hardcore pics and videos inside the members!!!" ... The members have these inserted inside them or do you mean inside the members area?

The text still doesnt gel and it is littered with spelling mistakes like "creame"

Apart from those comments .. quite nice ;)

[Jace]

jesus dude, what trailer park do you find these girls at?? i am suprised they have teeth!

[TheEnforcer]

I actually like the header for the tours that Newton doesn't like. LOL

Also, while soem of the text needs to be a bit clearer and such as he mentioned you also don't want it too polished because of the theme of the site.

[gonzo]

Originally posted by TheEnforcer@Jul 12 2005, 10:27 AM
I actually like the header for the tours that Newton doesn't like. LOL

Also, while soem of the text needs to be a bit clearer and such as he mentioned you also don't want it too polished because of the theme of the site.
Thanks guys....
DOS TIP

Never feed a designer while hes working!

[Dravyk]

Overall I like ...

Only thing seemed totally out of place was the "last set".

Underneath it says: "Added: May 20, 2005. Story: Ok, ok...I KNOW this isn't Florida on these pics but rather from a little fuck filled vacation and a few slut natives, but it DOES remind me of Florida because of her tanned body and pussy! I think you'll really like these and I am sooooooooo excited about our upcoming move to the SUNSHINE STATE!...Felicia"

So if the "tour" itself is admitting it don't belong there, then what is it doing there??? Again, my only complaint.

Oh one more thing. Being the last set before the join page, the last thing seen prior to the join, do you really want to make the surfer go "huh?" right before he's about to click for a sale? I don't think that's a good idea. So, if you're going to have an anomaly, that's the worse place it could possibly be. I'd just eliminate the anomaly all together.

Overall, very nice concept. And I assumed the mispellings had been on purpose. If not, it goes with the site.

[Trev]

I can't find anything that hasn't already been picked up, the FFD does top shelf work.

[aeon]

Sweet shit - I don't know which bar that proudly boasts they have PBR on tap you had to wade through to find those whores but it definately looks "authentic".

#1 should be a winner. #2 sucks. You have images with URL's to other sites and too much emphasis on the jigg. Trailer trash = white sluts.

#3 just sucks overall.

[gonzo]

Originally posted by aeon@Jul 12 2005, 03:01 PM
Sweet shit - I don't know which bar that proudly boasts they have PBR on tap you had to wade through to find those whores but it definately looks "authentic".

#1 should be a winner. #2 sucks. You have images with URL's to other sites and too much emphasis on the jigg. Trailer trash = white sluts.

#3 just sucks overall.
This is the funniest and most honest feedback yet!